Serendipity Blues

A chicken pox party?! :O Okay, this really is off on the flow and I think this kind of poem - light hearted and kinda childish - is best when ...

A little forced, but definately cute. I love poems that are formatted and structured to do with the theme - it makes them easier to read I think and it's ...

Well I liked this; I love anything about food - nom. I liked the flow and rhythm of it all - it worked well for one of those poems that ...

Mate.. This is good n_n I was a bit iffy at first when I saw all the rhyming - I'm one of those part-time poets who stary from the rhyme ...

I know you posted this a while back, but I love to trawl through the forums and just review older stuff - you find some good stuff that is usually ...

It's so good that you're comfortable about writing how you feel - especially on such a topic that people have so many views about. Being, myself, more spiritualist inclined, I'm ...

I read this when you first posted it and I wasn't sure whether or not I should comment or not - so I waited to see what others would say ...

Hi! So here's my review! First off, I don't really see how it's funny, but I think I might just be a bit dense, so we'll let that slide, shall ...

I'm gonna be blunt - I had a hard time with this and usually I'm okay with poems because that's pretty much all I critique. I dont think it was ...

Oooh; this is interesting, yes it is. I really liked it to be honest! It's growing on me as I speak. I liked the way that you structured it, although ...

Hi there! So here's my review; Some are afraid of it some pray for it We need it most when times are hard but the work it takes scares us ...

I didn't find this poem boring at all - fair enough it's not GREAT but I like it - it's quirky and I have a love for all things odd. ...

Oh; this was different - that's good! One thing I don't underatand though, is the fact that you have represented a tree by using a monk. Now, maybe I'm being ...

I absolutely loved the ending of your poem, I did. The increasingly smaller line lengths added a desperation to the piece that really helps the reader to understand what the ...

I agree with the reformatting of the poem - by doing this it'd be a lot easier to read and it'd flow better. Plus, as I was reading through it, ...